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A fun read, with very scrumptious scenes at the end. The first two choices was just kind of there though. I mean you’d get the same point across with either choice, and it doesn’t exactly let you know anything new. It’s fine though, many choices or not is a very preference based thing. I still felt that the plot progressed too fast, cuz like not MC fully trusting them right after they were kidnapped (that was one fight scene away from each other).
The sex scene is optional but still, for literally all the other choices, its still kind of too fast but the confines of the jam and all so its not too bad.
Presentation wise I like the music and everything, but sometimes the screen felt too cluttered with sprites (for good reason but I think you could’ve separate it better). The music kind of fits but some tunes didn’t really hit right w/ the vibes of the story.
I mean there’s a light church and a not-so-light church. Also MC saving the wolves from Talrem/The change in MC’s perspective would somewhat count as ‘Light in the Dark’…or maybe the seed magic dispelling the curse wink wink. The theme is there, present throughout the journey but not necessarily well incorporated (again its most likely due to how rushed the plot felt)
P.S So…Talrem… I can fix him. (Why is the villain always so HOTTTT HELPPPPPP) P.P.S You got me all excited at the mention of loincloths and its just boxers and undies (except those twink imps) :(
Rating: 3354