A pretty sweet indulgent romance between a floppa and a moon moon wrapped in the opening movements of a rebellion story. Einar and Charles are cute and the overall motions of the plot are fine, but the writing could do with some touch ups for errors and stiffness. There's quite a bit of suspension of disbelief needed for several parts of the scenario - perhaps a bit too much for me to really invest myself in the non-romantic side of the tale you're trying to tell.
There's some nice theming, and not just with the Jam theme, but it also rings a little dissonantly with the ending.
The changed main menu at the end is super cute though, mwah mwah.