While this is admittedly a bit unpolished presentation-wise (I hope it's not too mean to say that the itch page having to include a tutorial for where to find the start button in the title screen is pretty funny), the visuals in the story itself are superb. The art rules, and the backgrounds are curated and/or edited to support it with their lovely colors. On the whole, the audiovisuals do a great job at supporting the mood of the story.
Speaking of, the writing is both enjoyable to read in general and well-calibrated for the short scope of the narrative and its fragmentary, modernist structure. Every detail justifies its worth, and no line comes off as wasted. The reverse chronology adds a nice layer of resonance by painting the entire narrative in a retrospective, nostalgic light and letting the reader observe the protagonist from afar, knowing how things will ultimately turn out. A really tight package that achieves more in 3k words than many furry visual novels out there do in 30k.