Kylie have too exagerated boobs, but fine. The catgirl Rachel was hilarious. Veery cute. (Her morning face too. I relate with her). But she is insidious as always. Poor Kylie, being manipulated. And she's not the only one! I want a route in which I can appease Rachel's traumas and reform her (via punishment and advice) without losing much of Rachel's will and freedom. Make her submit the only necessary to make her change. To release some leverage or responsability to become more free and nice.
Could we know more about Rachel's life, inner self and past in future updates?
I'm really happy you have developed Natalie story more. I love to know more about the characters. But I would have given Natalie a wristwatch when she's dressed for work.
Zatch cautious and cunning contingency plans are fun too. Sometimes he looks like Dick Dastardly.
How well the different events are woven together, and how smoothly they lead the author to where she wants them to go without inconsistencies. How enjoyable it is to read. I'm going to give you 5 more €. It's like read a good serial. The graphics are lovely but the script... ah! Sex is almost superfluous. I think I need to check that roleplay website where the hat writes.