Spoiler Alert!
This is a very nice usage of the Jam Sprite, though as mentioned, perhaps a little variation in the body for the smut scene would’ve been better. The plot itself was cool, the ‘love with a time limit’ concept plus a plot twist at the end. Idk if it just went over my head, but maybe a bit of foreshadowing of the MC’s true identity wouldn’t hurt. This hits me right in the kinks too, so 🤤 thanks for the food.
Presentation wise, its simple, its effective, though I think the sound effects were a bit sparse and maybe there should be some bg music. There are some grammatical errors, but nothing too bad.
I kind of struggle to get the theme for this one, though I assume the light in the dark is MC’s sacrifice for the village who was on the verge of ‘darkness’ being Famine.
P.S Wine instead of milk is crazyy tho gimme some of that god juice, dem divine liquids, holy badonkers 😳😳
Rating: 3435