A pretty uneven VN overall. I quite liked the second half, but the first half felt like it dragged on a bit. The music and sound were sometimes used well (esp. on the second half) but sometimes felt less appropriate. Not much to say on the art side: the backgrounds work and the sprites are used competently. My favourite part of this VN is probably the worldbuilding with the sense of intrigue around the forest. That and Grams. Good job for your first VN! (Just read the page, it’s actually your second VN, oops!)