Chapters were surprisingly long, which was a good thing
Dev definitely likes frekkles a lot
Writing is a little bit clumsy here and there, there's a couple crazy lines like the "flirty option" when you meet Lexi for the first time and tell her she owes you a blowjob, left me flabbergasted lmao
MC shit talks himself a lot it gets kind of cringe but other characters do give him a little bit of shit for it so it kinda makes up for it, he gets called edgy a few times and he totally deserves it
Overall it was pretty enjoyable and I'll be waiting for the next updates