You present a very interesting concept and introduce some really cool ideas. I especially loved the 'Him' speak and the way it blends with and contrasts the 'Monster'. I also really enjoy the subtlety to employ to build the world and background, there's not really exposition and the reader is left to slowly piece together what's happened and what's going on and you do a really good job at that. The title screen and menus are really well done and add good polish, though I can definitely feel the game's unfinished nature during play, and it feels like we end while still only in the beginning. Overall it's a very interesting story that I would be excited to see completed.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the "Him" and "Monster" bits, trying to create a story with only the protagonist and antagonist was hard so it's good to know the set up I have did well! I'll have the VN completed sometime after the voting phase is over, so thanks again for the review! It means a lot to me ;w;