Crazy how you put this together in such a short time, I honestly wouldn't have been able to tell if you hadn't mentioned it at the end!
I think you wrote all the girls very appropriately, they all felt very naturally to how they would act normally.
Also I really love the outfit designs - great job incorporating their color schemes and elements of their outfits into more casual clothes.
I think this submission would absolutely blow away the competition if it had some more time to cook, so I hope you can either come back to work on it, or attend another jam in the future and make something even better!
Congrats on the submission for your first jam!