There is a lot of stuff happening in here (romantic drama, murder mystery, science fiction...) and the mashup of genres does yield results, even if it's not always completely smooth. Not to get too deep into spoiler territory, but the murder mystery aspect kind of takes a backseat after some plot beats that reconfigure the stakes dramatically; on the other hand, the final scene does a lot to make the piece feel more cohesive. The prose leans towards simple but nails the rhythm in the tenser moments, and the pacing only slows down in a late-game flashback that comes off as a little strained.
In general, the game's biggest writing asset is the infectious sense of joy it has to it – it's impossible to not get swept up in the crazy twists and become invested in the fun drama between the characters. It's got that je ne sais quoi of a story that knows exactly what it wants to do and then does it.
Presentation-wise: a couple of neat ideas and some very creative blocking with sprites make Your Eyes punch above its weight in the sense of using stock assets and jam-provided stuff only. It does feel like a story conceived with visuals in mind, and the music is good, too. I have to say that this is definitely the first furry visual novel I've seen that provides Conway's game of life recreated in Ren'py as a bonus feature.