The beginning made me quite uncomfortable, but that’s definitely supposed to happen and works in its favor to contrast with the middle parts. I like how the relationship of the MC and wolf develops: Ashiko knows he’s being selfish in his own way, Brutus keeps his guard up by keeping as an escort, but after getting to know each other and having a heart to heart they start becoming friends. That was a really nice story. And that makes the ending hit like a monstertruck. It comes from nowhere and I feel it contradicts Brutus character. It feels like it was plucked from a different VN.
As for the rest, the presentation is really well done: lots of cool art and fun sound effects. The writing has lots of grammar mistakes but can be followed easily so it didn’t distract much (“a western” is a movie, “a westerner” is someone from the West) (also, “I take a big inspiration” will be the new “making the clown”)
Overall, cool and interesting VN that got spoiled by the ending.