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Hi.

TLDR; to follow if into NTR or anti-NTR.

First impression here. The plot (so far) is nothing new, but the dialogues and so on are well-written, so that's always a plus! (did spot a few typos ;p)

I'm not usually into games where the player can choose which POV to follow, as it easily leads to confusion and uncertainty. "Oh, but then you'll have to play again from the start and take the other POV" yeah, but odds are I won't be remembering things enough to really appreciate the plots. However, in this case, the story is simple enough to follow both POV separately, so we'll see how this game grows. So far, and this is barely more than an intro so it's too soon, but the game doesn't offer a choice (yet?) on who's POV to follow, so going with one, then skipping back in time to go with the other, does allow to keep following the story more easily. But we'll see. :-)

From this version, one can tell at least 4 possible routes to play the game, pure, him cheating and her pure, vice versa, and both cheating. I'm curious if there will be eventually options to start going one route and redeem yourself or not as that could provide three more ways to play but the dialogues and mechanics necessary might be a bit too much for a small dev, so to speak; I advise FWIW in keeping a list of objectives and achieving them orderly, but it's your game so your rules. :-p

With Leandro and Jen, there is a lot of potential for sub-plots. I'm also interested if a Elora-Jen relationship will develop, but I confess I'm even more curious if a Cam-Elora-Jen would be possible; bisexual Cam? (drools...) (the same applies to Leandro, though I'd be expecting the threesome with Jen being more good-aligned and with Leandro more corrupt, but then how about a chance for redemption to Leandro?)

Honestly, with just the NPC's you've introduced already, there is so much room for sub-plots and side-quests already, it just leaves me eager to see how you'll build this. Having said that, I'll be following in itch, but if you add this to Steam, then I'll Follow and Wishlist it there too!

Best of luck, and I hope you'll enjoy developing this game to a full one!

Cheers!

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Thanks for the kind words, I really appreciate the support! The proper split for picking and swapping characters will be early in the next patch (basically when the prologues over). It should hopefully be fairly straightforward.

As for the redemption suggestion, I would like to include nuance to the corruption so its not just a corrupt or not check so the player can have played with some corruption in the way they want but want the character to still try and stay good for instance.

There is certainly room depending on player choices for some routes to have both Cam and Elora get involved with a character!

I'm certainly hopeful I'll be able to get on steam in the long run, it would be a dream to be able to get a game on there for sure.

Thanks again for the feedback and support, it makes my day to read comments like this <3