A good starting point. It's clever how you use the pod to restore the situation/health but at the same time still have a sense of pressure by having the creature progressively damaging the door to that room.
Not a fan of the videos though, in fact on mobile it was not loading most of the time and I just ignored that.
Thanks a lot for the thoughtful feedback — and great catch on the pod door! I really appreciate when someone notices those small details that add to the tension.
Sorry to hear the videos didn’t load properly on mobile. That’s concerning, since I did convert all of them into both .mp4 and .webm formats, which should be supported by most mobile browsers. I’ll definitely look into it further and see if there’s anything I can improve on that front.
Thanks again for taking the time to follow up — I really appreciate the attention you’ve given to the novel!
If you ever feel like replaying it, you can also try downloading the offline version from the F95zone forum and running it locally on your computer. That should eliminate any loading issues with the videos completely.
Thanks again, and I hope you’ll enjoy my future stories as well!
