Dang, this story's cool. I love how abstract it is - everything about it gives this sort of otherworldly feeling that perfectly encapsulates... some sort of feeling. That of working at a shitty, demeaning job that slowly eats at your sanity, probably. To be honest, I feel like I haven't fully parsed what it's about yet - but that certainly doesn't mean that I didn't feel it while reading, and I'd say that's what matters most.
I'll also shout out the sprites and the general style of the story - you wouldn't think the sprites fit with the bgs, but I think they work together to emphasize that dream-like feeling which is so present in this story and which gives it those all-too-important vibes.
Good job, this was a fun one to read!