Great entry! It looks really good and clean and ominous. You get really good mileage out of your space with way you use your sections, particularly the known/unknown lore dump and the timeline. The objectives are clear, the only thing I would tweak would be to make the repair goals a little more clear. Maybe fetching some sort of mcguffin "we need the [part] from the [location] to fix the platform" would be helpful for me and other new DMs, but also I think that a lot of groups would be fine without this level of detail.