hiya, reading this now - here are some notes i took!
i LOVE this apple ][ (or i guess Macintosh?) aesthetic. the setting even feels like it'd be something i'd play on that old machine in my uncle's office. presentation is glorious, portraits are great, map art is great, dithering on the title screen is great, the Chicago (or Chicago-like?) font a perfect touch.
THE FREAKING DOLPHIN TALKS <3 i remember the first time i read this, i read it out of order, saw the dolphin tranq gun, and thought "why would i ever want to hurt the dolphin?" and then laughing very hard when i realized why. "YOU BIPEDS ARE SHIT."
the "never meet your heroes" aspect of the crew is great, if i were running it i think i'd try to pepper in stories of their fame during other adventures before ever meeting them :)
great work. this put a big smile on my face. briefly scanned the previous comments and saw that you mentioned english is your second language -- just wanted to stress that while there are a couple of little issues here or there, the intent was clear everywhere and the sense of humour shone through!