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Very good update, I was initially confused why the 3 dragons were their own update but now I understand: each one has a lot of extra detail to them. Also, excellent bit of chaos with Maple's "let me be real for a moment."

I found a number of typos and some bugs, in the update scenes and overall. Hope this helps.

Bugs:

1.  Based on the descriptions afterwards, I think Arceus' Judgement is meant to be beaten with Protect, but you still lose HP doing that. Flash is the one that currently wins the exchange there.
2. There is an error on Zekrom and Reshiram's quiz. It says "Error: <<goto>>: passage "5 Zekrom Lost" does not exist," or "Error: <<goto>>: passage "5 Reshiram Lost" does not exist." So far as I can tell the error exists on failure for all questions.

Typos:

1.  Mispelled certainly when Maple talks after you catch Zapdos
2.  Typo in Courtney's initial scene, she says "an Blaziken's cock"
3.  Cynthia's Pokegear after Ch 4 might have a typo in the first line where the word "as" is meant to be "and."
4.  There is a typo on the Zekrom version of question 4 of the quiz where the link says Heavy Ball when it seems like it should say Level Ball.
5.  In the scene after breeding Zekrom (through her quiz) there is a typo where she says "I'm sure this work this time!" After Maple mentions getting her sister back, there is another typo where it says "the sounds was her rough scales "
6.  Before the Reshiram version of the quiz, there's a typo where she says "you told me thruth." On the first question, there is a typo where she says "even if it hits five times it will only hit as harder"
7.  In the 2nd Castle infiltration scene, there is a typo on the last line, "You stop your impression of and electrical fault"
8.  In both versions of the 2nd Dragon battle, there seems to be a typo where the word "to" is missing in "and the desire escape and be"
9.  There's a </span> block when you click Flashlight on the first Giant Chasm traversal challenge.
10.  There is a typo in the initial Iris scene with an unknown missing word or a "you" that got turned into a your, "and wrapping her legs around your, you." There's also a typo where it says "they'de never fit"
11. In the initial Hilda seen there is a probable typo with the MC " hamming her love-hole."
12. I think there's a missing word in the Anthea and Concordia scene in the line "they don't seem any less amazed that really just stood there while..." There's also a typo where they call N "Lorn N"
13. There is a typo in the Reshiram Oral scene in the line "the sheer pleasure of having you cock"
14.  In the pre-sex Juniper scene, she says "You're a lot more fun to look at that these boring old samples."
15.  In Juniper's initial scene, there is a typo towards the end, in the line "leaks down her thighs and onto the floor as you cock slips"