thank you kindly! and I agree that the readability is the weakest point of the module. I think (or at least hope) that once you have read it through once and understand it that the structure should make it something you can use to prepare several sessions of play.
As for your suggestion on the Boss fight, I think you are right and I’ll certainly look into refining it for the post Jam version! thanks for the suggestion on Fractured Reality as well I think its a very good point! Do you have any thoughts on Gravity Well or Time Wave? or did they make more sense as is?