It's an excellent module that I loved reading! It requires a bit of preparation due to the complexity of managing the two worlds, as well as the characters and objects that inhabit them. I think it requires at least three players to reach its full potential.
However, I don't understand the secret objective, "Lure the others into the Mirror World." If a player is in the Mirror World, he can't communicate or be seen by his peers. If he leaves the Mirror World, is he still under the entity's control? Would his illusion disappear? I don't understand how he could get his teammates to join him in the Mirror World.
I can't wait to play it with my friends! Great work!