Hiya, took some notes while reading, here they are! (in a very random order, apologies for jumping all over the place)
Including something like the asteroid tracker is something I wish I had done with mine, and the space is used very economically, nice touch.
Warden's notes are insightful and tactically chosen to make understanding this pamphlet quick and easy! Nice work
(worth noting that i had 2 or 3 questions about things that i didn't understand written here, all of which were answered by continuing to read the pamphlet, so i deleted them all. i hope this reads like the compliment i intend it to be!)
i have chosen to imagine that brennan's surname being "yolk" with some extra letters was on purpose given the "egg" haha. wait... brennan... iyengar... i see you, lone archivist! :)
i think this is an excellent mothership curveball, starting ostensibly with one win state (explode/divert) leading to a more satisfying one (engaging egg). im always a sucker for "or option c, let's talk it out" modules
very cool stuff!