This is a classic sci-fi horror setup! What I liked:
- Really strong headers that grab attention and organize information well.
- Black and White aesthetic means it's already printer-friendly and more approachable for the average Warden.
- Good exploration of the hive-mind's motives, behaviour, and abilities. Makes them a well-rounded adversary that can drive a lot of emergent conflict.
- Crunchy art that evokes the tone of the writing, I especially like the piece of the miner(?) on the inside-left panel.
What could be improved:
- Text is pretty small across the board, too big on the cover. Removing the second map from the outside-middle panel could give you some wiggle room to resize.
- Redactions on the NPCs, as others have mentioned.
- Premise is fairly conventional within the broader Mothership catalog.
All told though, this is a solid module. It's straightforward and appealing. I feel it would be a great pick to run at a convention or as an introductory one-shot!