Instrumentation and reverb/panning on the keys establishes a mysterious vibe, but the song overall is rather repetitive. IMO the song could've been developed with some variations on the piano motiff and maybe some key changes. Tbh the drums didn't really fit in the slow, legato vibe you established... for a second there I thought you were going to introduce an entirely new section, but all that really happened was to replace the key motiff with a drum beat.
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Thank you for the feedback, I'll take it into account as i plan to improve the track later on for my own experience. Unfortunately i got struck with other responsibilities and couldnt quite add a lot of details and blemishes that i had in mind. And yes, i had planned to introduce a different section with the drums and switch it up a little for an outro, but i clearly struggle with transitions like that, thought i would give it a try just to work on it tho. Thanks again for the feedback, it helps a lot!