Great work on this, the visuals are very cohesive! Here is my feedback:
+ The layout is clean, and the writing evocative
+ Progression of the horror is well-earned and well-explained for the warden.
+Iconss are useful shorthand,
- Mini-map on the back feels a bit redundant
- I don't think the redactions add anything in this instance, as the info isn't player-facing.
- Locations and monster keys are a bit too verbose; some more editing and trimming would help ease of use.
- Icons could be a bit more distinct, the triangle makes sense, but at this scale it adds to the similarity
Viewing post in To Dust We Shall Return jam comments
- Icons could be a bit more distinct, the triangle makes sense, but at this scale it adds to the similarity I just got super wrapped up in wanting that “person running from radiation” sign. I’m going to do some minor edits based on feedback and will just replace it with the classic round, ionizing radiation symbol instead.
Thanks!