I love me some ancient alien structures and temple guardians, so this feels right up my alley! hHereis my feedback:
+ Lost Caretaker is my jam, its dynamism really stands out as the central horror.
+ Time mechanic is a unique feature that adds some good mechnical impact for failure
+ Strong theme and some really enticing rewards!
- The ordering of the outside sheet could be changed a bit, as a physical product, it would be a bit confusing to read.
- Time mechanics are implemented well as mentioned, but might be a bit hit or miss depending on the group.
- Colour choices for backgrounds feel a bit disparate.
- Spiral descent consequences feel a bit too vague.
- The map is cool, but the usage of cylinders causes it to look a bit overwhelming and slightly harder to parse.
- I assume mining occurs at the ? Locations, otherwise, I am a bit confused, as these aren't explained.