I like this module! Great flavour. I love the moonbase-meets-system-shock-2 vibe, and fitting a full planet surface point-crawl onto this little space is impressive. I especially love the "scattered papers" aesthetic to pack all the maps into the inside, it's scrapbooky and imaginative!
Two things I feel could punch this one up for usability and polish!
- Text readability. The header font blurs together at small sizes and a couple pieces of body text (cassette, moon map) felt hard to see against their backgrounds.
- Monster descriptions lean on really flowery language that is evocative but doesn't really get balanced out by concrete "this is what the player is looking at" text. I like the vibes they give out but I find myself a bit lost!
All in all, fantastic effort. Lake of stomach bile is going to haunt my nightmares!