the map design is incredible and gives a great picture of where the adventure unfolds. While reading the key for the map I was confused by the abbreviations such as (E) and (G) and found the answer near the end of the trifold. Personally, it might make for less confusion if the description about the key cards comes before or attached to the map key. The art, aesthetics, and layout are all pristine with my only critique is I don’t like when blocks of text or how one of the tables spill over to another side of the trifold. I’m not sure if there is a way to finagle it so it’s all together. Reading this I really saw the vision that was put into it and I was already thinking of what I would do if I was to run it. I would like if there was some art of the mega cattle as both a normal or a demented would be add lots of vibes. Overall, I think you did an incredible job and you provided so much fun ideas I feel as if I could take the trifold and with minimum effort be able to run this adventure. Keep up the great work and I would love to see future projects!