A short simple game, but an interesting one! I like the story and our recruit character :]
I do agree with Atremic though that the story lacks gameplay; perhaps there should be a target/shooting fight with the dragon at the end? In the route I played, I felt like the intercession with the thief / person on the rooftop was a bit of a filler, considering the protagonist was hoping to meet with the Captain / King. Perhaps spend that time to build on the King, Captain, or player characters?
Otherwise, I enjoyed the art and the story! Keep it up and I wish you luck! :D