I love Doris, such an eco-terror icon! This is a really fun take on this style of survival horror! Here is my feedback:
+ Clean, readable layout
+ Great Pixel Art
+ fun, likeable NPCs and setting.
+ concise room descriptions
+ very easy to pick up and play!!
- a few typos and spelling errors, just needs another pass of editing, I think!
- A visual representation of the water-tubes doris uses on the map would be helpful. It took a few reads to figure out how she moves about.
-Text on the 'Act' page is a bit hard to follow, some format or layout changes would help readability, the party's aims could probably be bolded or emphasised too.
- The planet itself has some interesting setting things, but it is a bit unclear as to what the inhabitants are and how the planet works.