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Really cool use of the theme, I love what you've done with this overall. Here is some constructive criticism:
+ Presentation overall is pretty great, I like the layout and how the random tables are presented.
+ The text that is here is very evocative, and I like how the variation in 'the lie' leans into different forms of horror.
+ The map is very cool!
- it feels a bit vague as to what happens within this trifold, the text is evocative, but there is minimal direction or clarification on how to run this.
- Unclear about how/when the pacing of the horror unfolds
- Feels like this needs a fair bit of prep-work to cover the gaps in what the trifold leaves unsaid.
- the map is very cool, but I feel like it could be shrunk and the space could be used to add more context to the module as a whole.