Hey Post Code! Just did a let's play of your game!
Overall it was a really fun game! I love the gameboy color palette, the graphics were amazing in general and the story was fantastic! I love the character designs especially!
However, the translation was a bit rough, and there was a fatal crash when taking the ticket back to your home (just watch the let's play)... There also needs to be more save points, cause I lost a chunk of progress. I also mention in the lp that the story doesn't have alot of setting up. Ignore that, I'm an idiot! I didn't pay attention to the opening...
Otherwise I had fun! And if you make another version of your game which fixes the fatal crash, I'll be sure to make a part 2!