AHHHHHHHHHHHHH *screams into the void*
your writing for this one is simply beautiful - from the dialogue and how it reflects the character's personalities, to the way you paint the scenery and tension. my fav part def has to be when we are walking through the fields; the way you wrote it is so serene and peaceful. "The wind seemed to carry your words away. In the rustling leaves and shifting grass, you could almost hear the world whisper back: Welcome home." but the poem when we walk through the abandoned town falls nothing short, you really cooked with the writing for this one chef 🔥🔥
also the plot itself - you can just tell this one is gonna be good. im hooked already, not to mention the tension and the mystery of it all, especially with the second LI. almost got jumpscared when i was playing it again but choosing to decline alsem's pendent (i felt bad but all for the sake of experiencing the story fully and all it has to offer lol)
if the full game vn is paid to play no choice but to start grinding and save up, im not missing on playing this banger 🔥🔥 anyways that is all, congrats on the demo release and all the hard work you obviously put into it! <3 wishing you good things ^0^