Great work! I really enjoyed reading this. I've put some constructive criticism below:
+ I really appreciate the readability; the font size is good, and the text itself is clear and legible.
+ I overall like the layout and presentation of the text; it works nicely for me.
+ The idea is awesome, the cover page immediately sells me on the weirdness of the concept, and the name itself is great!
- The ordering of the pages feels a bit strange if it were printed and folded as the format implies, don't be afraid to lean into the restrictions/nature of the medium a bit more.
- There are several spelling and/or grammar mistakes, and the way the players/party is referred to is a little inconsisten., I think it just needs another pass or two for editing.
- It is a bit unclear as to why the rover needs to be housed before leaving on the rocket.
- Timeline is a bit misleading, as the extraction times are included with the travel times on the site description, it took me a few reads to figure out why I was confused by it.
- I assume the radishes become the white wyrms, but the text itself doesn't say outright., I think a small sentence or clarification would be easy to add in.