Pretty promising so far. The visuals look very nice and the premise of the story absolutely works. Seraphina is a good main character and so far I've enjoyed the two members of the supporting cast. I'm curious if there will be choices planned for future updates or if the story will remain linear. Either way, this is a wonderful proof of concept and a good spot to start from.
Thank you so much for the comments! Ideally I'd like to expand the game to choices I'm just trying to wrap my head around the software and how to go about that. I'd like to add stuff like city map, buyable items, etc, all the good stuff other novels have. For right now I'm focusing on the story and rendering images so for next update at least the story will remain linear.