Gives the vibe of “something bad just happened”. I can kinda imagine it playing in a cutscene of a game after like the villain has won and the heroes are trying to figure out their next steps.
I like where the piano chords are sitting in the mix. They sound crunchy without being muddy and really compliment the guitar part.
I generally don’t like so many sound effects in tracks because the music itself is already doing so much to convey the vibes. I think you don’t need them, though the white noise-y background rain sound does fill out the high end and also sounds a bit like tape noise so I have less of an issue with that hehe
Agree with DSound about the string entrance as well. It’s a bit abrupt.
Good job!