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Hi Windy, thanks for inviting me to play your game and do leave a like and subscribe at my channel if you like my videos.

I really appreciate the invitation to play your horror game as it is always an honour to play horror games like yours. I liked the premise of the horror game where the entire event occurs within a haunted motel with a lot of secrets for the main character to uncover. The strange motel host that treats the main character like a staff member that has been suspicious throughout the game and the presence of a strange tenant in the main character's allocated motel room definitely adds to the unnerving mood and atmosphere.

To be frank, I found the jumpscares to be slightly too loud and the story of the motel event to have quite a few plotholes like why would the main character clean the bathroom on their own, why would the main character continue living in room 5 when some stranger had access to it, why would the main character know how to fix the fusebox, why would the main character continue walking to the bathroom after seeing the dead body on the bed. The story could have been much scarier and creepier if there were more events and sound effects used in the game to portray the sinister activities that occurred in the haunted motel. 

Thank you for reading my comments and I wish you good luck you in your future endeavours.

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Thank you very much for playing the game and the detailed review. You're right that the story has plotholes but some of those things can be explained, there's lore too. A lot of those are just classic traits for short horror games like these, stories don't always make sense. Last Session, the game I made before this had an antagonist called Victor who is a demon/skinwalker, in this episode he switched bodies with the host (his real form is the old man), erased his memory and put him into a random room but the memory erasure messed up his understanding of everything, which is why he was in the wrong room. Victor messed with the fuse box in his hazed state which is why he had to be killed. Going to the bathroom is just natural human curiosity sometimes.