I will be updating this as i go through the reworked story, so heavy spoiler obviously.
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Seriously, you've been warned!
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Oh my stars, childhood friends? so cute.
Also, Retsu father looks really good. And I also see where did Retsu get his scatterbrainness from.
And i was also not mentally ready for crying 10 minutes in.
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Oh, some familiar faces, and events already.
Thank the stars Wilbert looks as good as ever. The extra haid did him really good.
My oh my, Otto is EVEN MORE foward, lol. not gona lie, i do like it, Retsu was embarassed but i wasn't OwO.
Also, poor Derrick getting smashed again YwY.
oh well, look at that, he still didn't learn how to handle a guitar.
WAIT JUST A SECOND, Roberto was a Artic Fox this whole time?!
Joking? yeah, I will pretend to believe that.
hum? Zack is a corgi? I will not believe that untill I see his butt.
Ah, Derrick is too cute for his own good
Stars, Evelynn sass is still top notch, and she still is the best character of this story, sorry guys, but she is just another level. (i miss the goth look, but she is still serving) [btw her icon is still the same as the old one, not sure if it's intencional or not]
STARS BELOW Retsu, losing you phone on your first day? you are so lucky someone droped it on the lost and founds.
Ok, that was definitelly the most unrealistic part so far, what sport car has such a big trunk to put a bicycle?
out of curiosity, where is Wil nipples? And Roberto's?
and all ends well with a session of dungeons & dra... I mean, legally distinct, tabletop rpg game, dungeond and wyverns.
and speaking of wyverns...
Well thats too much already.
I'm not going to do such a comment every chapter since i usually only talk abot the highlights, but this was a special time.
I love what you did with the overall story and progression of this. Retsu having friends and being in a shared house will add a really nice dynamic. And will be waiting very excitedly for the next episodes.