I'm excited to see this game continue to grow and expand.
The main issue I have with it... primarily with the main game, and I see it's pulled into this one as well... is the way time progression is handled. Each event seems completely
chronologically separated, with no sense of how one thing leads to another.
It does make following the story progression very difficult.
The other issue, which is just my thing rather than a general critique, is the relationship with the wife. As she's in the name of the game, it would be better if the love between them was more maintained, and John was merely about... entertainment, I guess. Desires the Evelyn has that aren't being met, but she still loves and likes her husband. Seeing her describe him as 'pathetic' and the 'illusion of their love' is actually quite a turnoff,
both sexually and in terms of enjoying the story.