First of all, I wish the creator/developer all the best in regards to their health, as I can empathize. Keep battling & best of luck!
I really like this AVN and am sad to learn there's little hope it gets finished, especially after a strong start with a potentially interesting hook/twist.
The following section isn't meant to dump on this AVN, it's constructive criticism. The section is longer because I'm passionate about this projects untapped potential, given the creator's talent & ability to write banter.
My only constructive criticism/observation is, excessive & inefficient dialogue (scene bloat).
Summarized: Random, charming & quippy tangents morph into long, drawn out & pointless conversations stuffed with Marvel quipps that triple-down on themselves, often killing the scene & story momentum.
Over time, the story becomes weighed down by the aforementioned inefficient dialogue (which feels more self-indulgent than disorganized), inadvertently creating a less engaging & more exhaustive experience.
It isn't as bad as it sounds, it's just unfortunate, as the quipps are decent & all the other aspects of this AVN are solid.
Had the writing been more focused/efficient, the same effort would've likely progressed the plot further, providing more charming & quippy content.
I'll definitely follow this developer regardless, and hope their health improves regardless of if they choose to continue this project. But here's to hoping. Cheers!