The opening UI screen is an very big draw, showing excellent effort on your part. The ability to set a name, quote, pronouns, and pick interests went a long way in driving up my anticipation for expected features.
The fact that you allow more choices than ive seen in any other story in just the opening makes it clear to anyone playing you have the skill and dedication to implement those same options into the final game.
I had no clue about the gender of Pups or the android (Which is possibly genderless, unless it's a future where they are capable of relationships), which considering you could chose you own characters pronouns, became a moot point while fostering my curiosity . It is likely indicated somewhere but, if it is, i chose to ignore it so I can easily believe them to be any gender i wish, as the player). With as many talking choices as youve included leaving their gender open is a great way to go, giving people who like those characters or do not, equal chance to accept or reject them.
I believe i may have accidentally confused this game with another where you date a monster, and I'am still not entirely sure iam wrong (as it's a demo) lol. However the quality of this is much better than what was shown for that game, which was a maybe, while this game is a definite "will read!".
If you add an extra option to the star menu, maybe as a second page since the first is done very well already, it will serve to make player anticipation rise even higher for the final release.
A somewhat simple option that fits the game already, is for each hobby you select you get a single "starting item", which you can
A. Show on a second screen right after name selection, letting you add a paragraph to explain both your interest and the item. This way either the item or hobby talent will be known to them and they will anticipate a moment to use them. This will be the key in allowing multiple playthroughs.
B. You could make their hobby a part of the story, not mentioned until needed, but changing the outcome of choices or allowing a unique choice. Such as if choosing ;
"reading", when finding hidden documents with a mere minute before discovery, you are able to scan and memorize their contents.
"Music" you get a chance to play piano for your date which will put them to sleep giving you several minutes to search their room, however if you are capable in music your song puts them into a deep sleep giving you extra time to search.
"Cooking" There is a scene where they drug your coffee during lunch. However by talking about the food recipes you complement the coffee and, not recognizing the odd aftertaste from your experience with sweeteners, you get an option to not drink it.
C. For minimal effort, you could simply add I sentence at the beginning saying "You always keep xyz with you from a lifetime spent learning about zyx".
I know you have the dedication to do it and you will enjoy the challenge of implementation. :)
However i also know you are already implementing a hobby mechanic, if you have not done so already.
I believe there will definitely be a body horror element you encounter with the date, one which you can eventually use to save yourself and your heart. Something about needing/being able to take others body parts into yourself, either for strength or out of neccesity. Including the possibility that the parts willingly gave their lives for their one son, so he could survive, in a unique and questionable procedure nobody would understand. Perhaps one the daughter was meant to be a part of, yet with her surviving, the brother still needs something from her to be complete and truly live among society (Such as eyes, a face, or legs for instance...)
Thanks for entertaining my speculations at the end here, and i will be quite embarrassed if it turns out this game really is about him being a bio engineered monster, yet I didn't see it for being a demo. I would be glad to consider volunteering any help if somebody backs out or you have ideas on expanding the title (I spent a lifetime developing my voice and diction for voice over work and have a library of sounds/effects)
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