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There's a bit of broken english here & there in the explanations that make it hard to understand. Also a lot of people just want hand holding instead of learning how to play a game by themselves. I do think there's a lot that can be explained better tbh and I'm not really sure how to point that out cause of how much there is. I think if you can get someone native english to look over your explanations and cleans thing up, it would be a lot better.

Also information is kind of split up in a weird way. In example I find it weird that sniper says it double checks crits but you need to go to the info section & under buffs find the part that says "Double Check - If the first attempt is false, the check is repeated." I feel that you could either just better explain it in the buff to begin with or have that info accessible in the buff section instead of the info section. 

For example make sniper instead say: "Tries one more time if initial crit-chance fails" (I'm not a fan of this wording either but I think it's better than "double checks crit-chance")

"hand holding instead of learning how to play a game by themselves" - Then some people will think that I think they are idiots.
I think this will be an eternal problem.
No matter how elegantly I describe it, there will still be those who do not understand something. Someone needs to be shown a video so that he understands it.