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A few side characters, 

 WillWilliam

John John

ElizaElizabeth Blackwood

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That is really cool, and I like how well you planned it out.

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Thank you! I can tell you about the story if you'd like

Totally! feel free to tell me all about it.

Okay, this story is called Hidden in the Dark. It's a historical fiction taking place in England, 1855. ( I've never done a historical fiction before, because I'm not really into them, but it would be a shame to let a decent idea go to waste.) This will probably suck, but here I go anyway.

14-year-old Lorelei's mother, Elouise, died mysteriously when Lorelei was 9, and gave her a special necklace. 5 years later, Lorelei's father, James, got a job with the local gang in order to care for his daughter, but something went wrong, and James ended up in prison. Lorelei, alone in the world, cut her hair short and got a job in the local mines under the name Lawrence. The mines were dangerous enough on their own. But Lorelei's boss, Mr. Blackwood, made them worse. Luckily, Lorelei found friends: Will, John, and Caleb. Caleb noticed something is off with Lorelei, or should I say, Lawrence. Lorelei and Caleb became close friends, and one day, Caleb figured out Lorelei's secret. The two grow closer and eventually fall in love. But there's a lot of evil in the mines, and the friends find out that Mr. Blackwood is more than meets the eye. When a mining tunnel Lorelei and Caleb were in collapses under suspicious circumstances, it's up to the twosome to stop Mr. Blackwood once and for all. 

I'm suffering from writer's block, but I posting this anyway, in case  I accidently delete it.

No, that is such a good idea and I like it! Thank you for telling me.

that's AMAZING!!!!!!!!! make sure to keep writing in your spare time, it's very good!

Thank you so much! You guys are so sweet!

very nice

In case you're all wondering, Lorelei and Caleb do get married.

awwww

I actually wrote the proposal scene

yay!!!!

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I take it you want me to send it?

if you want to i don't mind if you don't 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️ 

Setting: Elouise's grave, late afternoon.

 Lorelei and Caleb are visiting Elouise's grave, talking about memories. 

Caleb takes Lorelei's hand and looks her in the eye. "I have something to ask you," he says quietly. Lorelei brushes a few strands of hair out of her face and smiles. "What is it?" Caleb takes a deep breath, "I can't imagine living without you, and I want to make more memories. Together. Will you marry me?" Lorelei catches her breath, tears in her eyes. She rushes into his arms. "You don't know how much you mean to me. Of course I will!" They stand there, embracing, a soft breeze blowing through the garden, washing away all the sad memories, and sweeping in the new ones.

whoooooooooo!!!! yay i love it it's so cuteee

your eliza looks kinda like my eliza

I was thinking the same thing🤣

loll

BTW, if you hover over Eliza's picture, you'll find out a secret 😉

oooooooooooooh found itttttt that's a good twist i would not have guessed it

yay!!! I decided to add some drama. Also, Will and Eliza start dating

oh and what does her dad think

I dunno. He probably doesn't approve, but what do they care

oh, fair enough