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Ok, I think I understand it clearer now - thanks for talking me through it. I thought the Contingency Plan might basically be birds but wasn't sure. I think it would be helpful to show that with a bird symbol as it's a handy shorthand for Root players to understand its role at a glance. So maybe just (bird symbol) Contingency as otherwise, you'd have to reduce the font size to make it fit.

I was also thinking you could remove mention of 'face up' and 'face down', and instead just add 'Place plans face down' in small text below the Contingency Plan slot. I feel like you would naturally assume cards get placed face up, so only need to specify the one exception.

I hope you don't mind, but I've had a crack at rewording the Evening phases in a slightly shorter, hopefully clearer way:

- Place a visitor centre in a clearing you rule without one. Score completed plans in that clearing, and in any connected clearings you rule without Visitor Centres.

- If you Scheduled plans, place 1 in the (bird symbol) Contingency. Then, one at a time, add the remaining plans to the Itinerary slot with the fewest plans, excluding (bird symbol) Contingency.

One thing that has just occurred - if you score in a mouse clearing then have another connected mouse clearing, do you rescore the same plans in that slot? Or is a scored plan removed from the Itinerary? That might need clarifying somewhere if that's the case.