Hello! Nice to see a Vx ace game in the jam! The story was short, but interesting. I though I don't see much the point in having the fantasy twist in the end, since it wasn't developed and it doesn't really add anything to the prior events. Though I gotta admit it made the story a little more interesting to follow.
The gameplay was nice, with short little minigames and puzzles sparkled around. I didn't particularly approve of the switches/lights puzzle, since if you don't know the trick to solve those puzzles (which I didn't) the player might have to spend a lot of time just to solve it. I personally don't like those puzzles because with no hints they're just trial and error (and a difficulty spike) for the average player.
If you're interested, here's the VOD from the stream: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2459286982