This game had the concept of the main character working the midnight shift at a mini mart with a killer on the loose. The game has a clear storyline where you serve a few customers, head out of the mart, get attacked by the mysterious killer and run away.
I felt that the game could have build up more suspense and tension where customers entering the mart could have peculiar behaviour, actions or conversations with the main character. Moreover, I noticed that the main character has to move out of the mart in order to trigger the next event which took me a bit of time to figure out since I prefer staying at the counter of the mart. Hence, perhaps some hint could be provided as to when to walk out of the mart. Additionally, the killer could have walked faster to make the entire escape sequence more intense and scary. Lastly, I am a little confused by the main character's father actions at the end of the game as instead of heading to the police immediately, why did they choose to stay near the killer's base at night?
Overall, thank you for reading my comment and I wish you good luck in your future endeavours.