Hiiii, thank you so much for the kind wordss and best wishes!! 🧡 To address your concern, those were actually intentional! I try to give certain characters unique narration styles (even though I suck at doing it). You may (or may not) have noticed this with Nallis’s way of talking that both his dialogue and narration avoid apostrophes. That’s just one example of those little "quirks" I like to addd. But still, I really, really appreciate you taking the time to point it out and write this. Thanks so much for the support!!! 🧡🧡