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Hello! I still need to buy the game, but I did have this question in my mind ever since I saw the new arrangement of the fragments. Are we still going to be able to learn more about Alice and Wonderland? Since his fragment got removed, I've been starting to think that they won't be explored later on in the game.

Ah! Okay! That makes a lot more sense! That's a very nice, subtle touch to put. I'll keep an eye out for that when the full release comes out.

(This comment contains spoilers for Achier's fragment. Please breeze over it to avoid seeing anything if you don't wish to.)

Hello there! Been a fan of this series for quite a while. I'm sure you've heard the whole "great story" and "amazing characters", so I don't need to say much of that but I would like to say that those definitely ring true in my opinion. One of the things I spotted that I think might need change was during Achier(Sun)'s route. There were some parts in the dialogue when Achier is talking to himself, such as "Raised my right hand" and "Was even paler than usual". It could just be me, but I kind of think it may be meant to say "I raised my right hand" and "It was even paler than usual". I can list the remaining ones that have a similar error if need be, but it's probably preferable to know if this was intentional or not before I do.

That's all I really have to say, except some more thanks. Thank you for making this visual novel series. Everything always seems to connect eventually as the new additions come in and I'm quite excited to see how you wrap this up. I wish you the best, Spark.