This was SO COOL!!! I loved the way you added animation, it kept the screen from being boring and it was so cool with all the camera movements and stuff, especially going back and forth while talking!! The story was a bit confusing (tho that might just be me, I'm a bit slow haha) but I really liked it either way!! (Undertale reference spotted--)
Overall this is super super cool!! I see it's a demo, I'd love to play a full game like this! You made it really visually interesting for a VN and it's so inspiring to see such a cool vn~~