No I GREATLY appreciate all constructive criticism. I struggled a lot with this manifesto/writing project. I am not used to writing like this or this creatively so this was a big change of pace for me. I often think a lot about game design and theory and all of this high fulant concepts sometimes. It can be super overwhelming. I realized that sometimes its importance to keep the things you love simple and then complicate further as you need to for your life.
Sometimes simple is a great starting point and I hope it helps others <3.