!! (small) SPOILERS for all chapters
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LOVE THIS THING SM. I really liked how you managed to portray the depression and anguish of the [narrator] after E's passing and offered all those choices to still make us form the core of their character, the characters were all pretty interesting to read about and interact with, each with such different personality and reactions to our actions : all routes were given a fair amount of content (which I greatly appreciate), and just to end THE TWIST ?? cannot say i was 100% surprised especially after that one drunk call by ma'am doc at 1 am but DANG it still hit. All the scenes with Juliet and her thoughts were genuinely making me uncomfortable and I admit I wished I do actually something about her actions more than once but hey, what can I do about that huh, I'm only a reader.
Pour finir, sincèrement bravo pour le boulot d'écriture ; les tournures des phrases étaient vraiment plaisantes et expressives et je me retrouve agréablement surprise en réalisant que c'est une française qui ai écrit tout ça. Merci beaucoup pour votre travail.