Interesting concept. It clearly needs some more work, but I think it has great potential. It's more of a game than just another VN, which is a nice change of pace.
Some bugs I found:
There's a problem with the display of Brian's name:
The "Unknown" bar is not correctly aligned.
Here, some of the game dialogue switched to German. It is my system's default language, but this doesn't appear anywhere else in the game. No idea why this is happening.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of this game!
Take care.